Priscilla’s Tale


John James Audubon (1785 – 1851) American Silver Fox Plate CXVI of The Viviparous Quadrupeds of North America, 1845 – 1848

The cat crouched in the shadows at the top of the stairs. She could still hear the humans nattering on about the potion below.  She knew they still had not found it; the thought cheered her.

There were towering piles of… books –that’s what they called them– all over the house. She took a grim satisfaction from knowing that one of those piles now lay scattered across the worn floorboards. It served them both right.

She smoothed and cleaned her fur and let her mind wander. She knew she hadn’t always been a cat. It was hard to remember, but she tried anyway. It seemed important.

Years before there had been a young man with dark hair and twinkling eyes. He’d been kind to her. He brought her flowers and sweet things to eat. What had he called her? She squeezed her eyes into slits and thought.


When he asked she’d told him her name was Prissy. He laughed. “Prissy? A girl as beautiful as you can’t be called ‘Prissy’.” Blushing furiously she’d told him that her mother had called her Prissy right before she died, and Prissy it would always be. She’d felt bold saying so many words to him in a row. “Well,” he pronounced, “you look more like a ‘Priscilla’ to me.”

She was staying at the cottage then, and the old one with the bent fingers was different: younger, with beautiful long, red hair and bright green eyes. Prissy felt terribly awkward around her, but when Father died she’d come asking for work. The young woman had looked down at her… no. That wasn’t right.

The woman had looked up at her. Yes. Definitely up.

She stared intently at Prissy’s face. It made her nervous, and she began to fidget.

“Stand still. Look me in the eye.”

Prissy obeyed. The woman shook her head and said, “Well, come in. Let’s see what you can do. Personally I can’t imagine, but you’re meant to stay.”

Two months later the man had come calling. He brought her gifts and spoke softly to her. On a crisp autumn day he proposed. She accepted.

“I should have asked your guardian first,” he said guiltily. “I know! Invite me for tea this week and introduce me. Then I can ask for your hand properly.”

Prissy practically flew home. She had chores to finish. She didn’t want to upset her mistress: she might not allow her to have the young man to tea! The thought was enough to send her into a panic, but she needn’t have worried.

“Yes, you can have your young man to tea. Frankly, I’m relieved you know any young men. You obviously have no talent for magic. I can’t for the life of me figure out why all the signs said you needed to be here.” She shrugged, then seemed to forget it.

Prissy told the young man to be at the cottage for tea that Thursday. He was so pleased that he kissed her!

On Wednesday she polished the silver tea service and laid the best cloth on the table. The woman had been working on something all day. That evening after dinner she asked Prissy to go lock the hen house.

A full moon hung in the purple velvet of the evening. Prissy stopped for a moment to admire it and spotted someone at the edge of the forest. She squinted: it was him! She started to raise her hand in greeting but stopped short and stared, horrified, as he shrank and fell on all fours. His dark hair spread, covering him from head to foot. Suddenly where the man had been there now was a fox.

It ran across the clearing toward the hen house. Stunned, she heard the commotion break out inside. She walked forward and looked.

The fox had caught a hen between its teeth. The bird was fighting back, trying to peck its attacker, but the fox shook it violently. It fluttered for a moment, magnificent in its struggle, then wilted and lay still. The fox turned and looked at her.

Prissy fled toward the cottage. He caught her by the arm and spun her around. There was blood on his lips.

“You weren’t supposed to see that.”

She tried to get away, but she was as helpless in his grip as the hen had been. He said some words she didn’t understand, and she felt herself changing. She opened her mouth to scream…




© Fran Conte Saracco



Apparently the saga continues in stranger ways than I had anticipated. It was hard to get this one under the word count. Let’s see how the speakeasy likes it. 🙂


33 thoughts on “Priscilla’s Tale

    • 😀 Yay!

      I’m a little worried about this one. I had to cut at it ruthlessly to get it under word count, and I feel that a little *something* was sacrificed for it. What was cut was certainly not essential, but… I don’t know. I have my fingers crossed!


  1. Wow… I’m glad this story continued. I liked how you wrote the cat. I thought No Time For Patience was enchanting, and I see you wrote another… I’ll have to check it out. Oh, btw… you better check out my story, Gringa.


    • Will do!

      My mother-in-law is on her way from out of state, so if I don’t get to it this afternoon, I’ll definitely read it this evening. I’m always in the mood for a good story. 🙂


  2. This was so fast paced I could hardly breath. “You weren’t supposed to see that” was my favorite line. It’s almost as if he were saying now she has to pay.

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  3. Intriguing! Serial fiction is hard (I know!) especially with prompts, word counts, etc. but it’s so much fun. Great job.


  4. I enjoyed the layers of mystery… considering that it’s a serial, it’s tempting to say you could have left the big reveal a little longer to make this feel less rushed as a standalone piece. But the characters are so perfectly in voice throughout, I want more 🙂


  5. Love this! You had me fascinated from beginning to end. I like how you flowed so smoothly into the flashback. Often those are abrupt, but this fell into it smoothly and naturally. I’m wondering if the mistress knew something she didn’t when she told her to lock the hen house? It seems her shapeshifter man was a sorcerer as well. So interesting. A fascinating tale told with great skill. Well done!


    • Thank you! I’m very much enjoying these characters, and they’re quite insistent that I write the whole sordid tale out for them.

      As for the mistress… she knew the hens were being killed, so she’s been making an effort to lock the hen house after dark. There are definitely things going on outside her purview, and Mr. Silver has a story of his own to tell.

      That’s all I’m going to say about that for now. 🙂

      There is a part one to which I refer in “Priscilla’s Tale”. If you haven’t read it, and you’re interested, you can find it here:


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